From da28f57b69a0669e4be4c73921e66d215102f61b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ekaitz Zarraga <ekaitz@elenq.tech>
Date: Sun, 22 Sep 2024 21:53:08 +0200
Subject: LOCO: wording

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 papers/LOCO-24/contents.latex | 9 ++++-----
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diff --git a/papers/LOCO-24/contents.latex b/papers/LOCO-24/contents.latex
index 3046d45..88d3041 100644
--- a/papers/LOCO-24/contents.latex
+++ b/papers/LOCO-24/contents.latex
@@ -125,10 +125,9 @@ Computing}{December 05, 2024}{Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom }
   rooted on the simplification of personal computers by embracing the
   programming language \textit{Scheme}, and describes how this strategy
   provides a high level of abstraction and opens the door to many research
-  topics that directly challenge the current computing ecosystem, where
-  industry relies in the continuous delivery of heavily specialized hardware to
-  support the ever growing software demands, mainly coming from Unix's
-  heritage.
+  topics that directly challenge the current computing ecosystem, which relies
+  in the continuous delivery of heavily specialized hardware to support the
+  ever growing software demands, mainly coming from Unix's heritage.
 \end{abstract}
 
 %% Document outline:
@@ -187,7 +186,7 @@ Computing}{December 05, 2024}{Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom }
   In the von Neumann model the data and the program are both written to and
   read from the \textit{Store}. This fact imposes limitations in any design
   that aims to have direct access to memory and multitasking, as any running
-  program could read and manipulate other running program's memory, and even
+  program could read and write other running program's memory, and even
   manipulate its behavior, overwriting the program itself.
 
 \subsection{Unix's heritage}
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