LOCO: Conclusions to the point

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 \section{Conclusion}
 
-  There have been several attempts to use Scheme in bare-metal, and make
-  Lisp/FP machines, but few combined their ideas with commodity FPGAs.
-
-  Combining an FPGA and a simplified approach opens for many optimization
-  options where novel research ideas can be express due to the language
-  oriented design of Scheme, some were proposed in this paper but more can be
-  developed and potentially applied in other languages that use similar
-  constructs (FP languages, but also Python and JS).
-
-  The cited literature, more specifically Oberon, demonstrate a minimal system
-  can be easily implemented and maintained by a single individual and the level
-  of simplification approached in its design is parallel to the one proposed in
-  this document, meaning that a computing system like the one proposed here
-  would be possibly created and maintained by anyone, while keeping it secure
-  and accessible.
-
-  On the other hand, extending the reach of the language enriches the
-  relationship the user has with the computer. If the selected language is
-  powerful in terms of the level of abstraction it can provide, it could become
-  the only tool a user needs for every single administration task, including
-  hardware upgrade or optimization.
+  This paper introduces a computing system that combines a reconfigurable CPU
+  and a simplified approach to Operating System design that embraces the
+  programming language \textit{Scheme} and proposes several optimizations and
+  research areas that its design would enable.
+
+  The cited literature demonstrates systems with a similar level of
+  simplification to the one proposed in this document can be implemented and
+  maintained by a single individual, meaning that the proposed computing system
+  would be possibly created and maintained by anyone, while keeping it secure,
+  accessible and bootstrappable if carefully designed.
+
+  %% TODO: only if cite vernacular programmers properly
+  Literature also supports that extending the reach of the language enriches
+  the relationship the user has with the computer. If the selected language is
+  powerful in terms of the level of abstraction it can provide, like the one
+  selected in this paper, it could become the only tool a user needs for every
+  single administration task, including hardware upgrade or optimization,
+  providing a solid foundation for more human-centered design where
+  the antiquities from the times of Unix can be displaced.
 
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